by Kips2.0 Jan 26, 2012
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Love, romance /
desired love
Come, fall into my hand, |
I really like this poem, it's very sweet and romantic. 5/5 |
This is really terrific and endearing. I love how you kept your transitions from each stanza intact with a smooth rhythm. Beautiful and in depth wording, KUDOS! More thoughts to your writing. Blessings to you. |
by Ronel McCarthy
'Override your tears' .......you would do so many positive things if given the opportunity .........creating / building . Lovely write |
by Kips2.0
Thanks. |
by Bridges
Enchanting, Charming and Inviting, to say the least!!! This is a wonderful poem. Seductive yet sweet and promising! How I would die to hear this said to me!!! :O Haha But Anyways, Lovely write, Kenny. :) |