Omg this poem almost made me cry very sad but very well written. 5/5

Very sad and powerfully written.
Amazing poem.

5/5

-Heather

Wow very disturbing but very good.. awesome job!!

This is an amazing way to write something so emotional. it makes you feel like you know the lil girl. :(

I added this poem to my favourites. It has a great flow to it which makes it a fast read and keeps you interested without flaws.

#the topic is such a sad topic and you have expressed this very well and described what it is like for a young child to suffer abuse. the ending was devastating and you wrote it in a way which brings tears to your eyes. Sadly it is a fact that this happens in the world and so many people ignore this.

I thought you done very well on this poem and the idea of it, it was very much like that small child had wrote it herself and was taking us through part of what she suffered.

The relationship between the girl and the bear is such a deep one and it so meaningful in this poem that she died with the bear. I believe every little girl should have a teddy, they are perhaps the first thing we trust and one of the very few things which do not let us down.

amazing job, very moving poem.