My last farewell

by Kayla Sonya Dearing   Jan 27, 2012


I am falling
Falling into a hole
Falling into the shadows
Falling into a black hole

There was a day
That I could see your face
That I could hear your voice
That I could feel your stroke

That day has gone
I can no longer see your face
I can no longer hear your voice
I can no longer sense your stroke

The recollections of us
Has vanished
Like the moon been buried behind the clouds
Like the sun has been buried behind the rain.

There is no sunlight in my day
There is no moonlight in my night
There is no scab over my wound
There is no us anymore

You lay there frozen
The blood gushed around your body
I shed tears over your body
Like a river after a typhoon

I give you your last embrace
I give you you're last kiss
I give you you're last I love you
And now I give you you're last farewell
<3dragonfly angel<3

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  • 7 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This poem is really sad...full of emotion but some parts contribute of none vivid sort of lines. But, I think this is your style of writing as what Chelsey said. Nonetheless, I can picture out the message behind this..I can sense the feeling conveys in the imagery and I enjoyed reading. Keep it up more:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This wasn't made for not writing in a long time...

    I think what youre going to hear from readers is:
    Don't capitalize each line of every stanza..I know people say it makes the poem a little harder to read.
    Theres also a lot of repetition in this poem. Repeating words usually weakens the poem a little, then again I see thats the way you actually wanted your poem, you purposely did that so I didn't mind it so much.

    The sadness and tone in this poem was definitely felt. I'm sorry for your loss!
    Chelsey

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