by Salina Is Beautiful Jan 27, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Dark loving heart |
by keith
You need more words to make this more powerful. |
by keith
You need more words to make this more powerful. |
I think adding to this, putting more into it is the key. You gave the reader no emotional value or something to feed off of. |
by Jenni
Short but powerful poem. |