Comments : Broken and Torn

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is beautifully written. You use the right words and you made it flow smoothly, i see nothing worth fixing in this.

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    This poem is really powerful.
    "A silent madness, Creeping
    slowly up walls"
    ^when I visualised this in my mind, I really felt like something is creeping behind me.
    Very nice dark poem.
    5/5