Beautiful Thoughts (Collab with gIrL)

This is wonderful. You two did a really good job in coming up with

Some things are beautiful thoughts
but I shall finish it up just right here;
for they cannot spin into reflections
that twirl our dreams into something real

Life leave us speechless sometimes,
so we mime but our thoughts are loud.
Battling a long trail of silent beliefs,
on what's rejected and what's allowed

Some dreams would mimic our realities;
or bring the life to a thought in our mind.
Although they may last for a minute or so,
we live a possibility, our reality declined

It's tough to split the firm walls we've been
carrying around, or those we're born inside.
But to close windows we bear within our eyes
seems impossible -oh it is impossible to hide

^^ I love these stanzas alot and the poem is magnificent :) u two did great together and can't really tell who wrote what,,it's amazing with great flow and rhyme with amazing wording,,wonderfully done 5/5

The flow and rhyming is brilliantly done here. Doesn't feel like it's written by two different person. The sync of thoughts and putting them in words beautiful.

/So write me -a beautiful coincidence-
on the corners of your thoughts
And I will capture you -a still photo-
taken in a moment of distraught.

//
These are my favorite lines. The imagery here is brilliant ...

overall, a wonderful treat, to read two talents in one :)

An awesome poem for the both of you. The rhyming was so flawless like it came so naturally rather than forced.

You two make an awesome team!!!

x

Now, What can I say about this, I read this really early this morning, but was too weary to comment or even comprehend what I was reading.

Hmmm, There was something really inspiring and strong here, It was a piece that I can say has that uniqueness of both of you,
I can see the power of Nana and the gentleness yet strength of Meme,

You girls rock!!!!