Hahahaha, I love sudden collabs too. Who know maybe our chat tomorrow will end up with a collab ??

And yes, just because we cant achieve those dreams in life; they still remain as a beautiful thoughts in our heads.

Thanks for this one nana, I really needed a way to express it out loud.

Luv ya sis <3

Yes, my dream has finally come true,
I've made countless collabs with both of you here, but let me tell you, in cruel honesty, this tops in single piece I've wrote with both of you, by far.

nana, you always have a way with words, like you're manipulating them in order to have the reader grabbed in full force, up to the point where I finish reading and I Still need more of it.

gIrl, i can clearly see your touch in this poem, the way you nourish it with brutal honesty and the simplicity in your words, It kind of sends an image of a defiant voiced girl that isn't afraid a bit to face a world full of trouble, and that it something very unique

put you two in a mixer and you get magic, I'm really impressed with you girls
5/5 isn't enough, honestly.

Oh you girls are more than awesome.. love every verse of it! so unique... if I had 5le2 I would've said more.. but chapeaux-bas sista's

Now, What can I say about this, I read this really early this morning, but was too weary to comment or even comprehend what I was reading.

Hmmm, There was something really inspiring and strong here, It was a piece that I can say has that uniqueness of both of you,
I can see the power of Nana and the gentleness yet strength of Meme,

You girls rock!!!!

An awesome poem for the both of you. The rhyming was so flawless like it came so naturally rather than forced.

You two make an awesome team!!!

x

The flow and rhyming is brilliantly done here. Doesn't feel like it's written by two different person. The sync of thoughts and putting them in words beautiful.

/So write me -a beautiful coincidence-
on the corners of your thoughts
And I will capture you -a still photo-
taken in a moment of distraught.

//
These are my favorite lines. The imagery here is brilliant ...

overall, a wonderful treat, to read two talents in one :)

Some things are beautiful thoughts
but I shall finish it up just right here;
for they cannot spin into reflections
that twirl our dreams into something real

Life leave us speechless sometimes,
so we mime but our thoughts are loud.
Battling a long trail of silent beliefs,
on what's rejected and what's allowed

Some dreams would mimic our realities;
or bring the life to a thought in our mind.
Although they may last for a minute or so,
we live a possibility, our reality declined

It's tough to split the firm walls we've been
carrying around, or those we're born inside.
But to close windows we bear within our eyes
seems impossible -oh it is impossible to hide

^^ I love these stanzas alot and the poem is magnificent :) u two did great together and can't really tell who wrote what,,it's amazing with great flow and rhyme with amazing wording,,wonderfully done 5/5

This is wonderful. You two did a really good job in coming up with