Mush Mush

Jenni,*

The question is what the hell are you? lol!

I really like the question you left us with when reading this poem, honestly I want to know what you are. PM me! As for the title, I giggled at that. Mush Mush? reminds me of peas or something green. I think Connors baby food was rubbing off into your writing.

I liked this short poem again. You should be writing more short poetry. It's strong. The descriptions in this held power because of the tone you had and while those description weren't all particularly strong you emphasized on that bold tone.

-Mel