A long time ago.

by Chantelle   Jan 28, 2012


Forever seems such a long time ago,
skinned knee's, hopscotch, all the wonders of childhood
Seem so long ago.
Bright smiles, sillyness and laughter with friend's when did thing's get so complicated, so messed up?
So dark and twisted, i feel like an dramatic piece of art, on display my raw emotion's showing to the world, like my heart has no scar's.
But though i feel them, the scar's must be deep within.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I like the feeling of youth in this, the lost innocence makes me sad though.

    I think it would read better if you broke up the lines a little and maybe took out a few filler words, but I did enjoy the emotion in this piece it was very easy to feel as the reader.