Desire

Your words are amazing. I love the twist in this poem. They are my favourite type of poems. We all feel high when we are in love and then somehow it is over! Every line is magic, because it draws you in.

The title is PERFECT for this poem. Desire, because it draws you in and it could mean anything in love. I do love the last line it is my favourite because it wraps up how love is. ' I cant believe we're over'. Love is a journey that takes you on a ride and sometimes it does end quickly. The flow and your words are amazing :). 5/5

Aw. that ending is sadd. the whole poem was a nice uplifting poem until the last line. . . sighs.. but isn't that how love works. you really think its good and then BOOM something happens and it changes everything and suddenly you're "over" . . unbelievable but it happens... :)