Stress you

by UndeadGrace   Jan 30, 2012


You have to much stress in your head
Its the reason why you felt so dizzy
And collapsed on your bed
Wishing that it happend to me instead of you
I been through far worse
What's one more pill to shed

To make it even worse
I add on to your stress
It infects my heart of course
Along with a pinch of remorse

To fear if they ever catch a glance
Of are secrete romance
Would cause only more chaos
All the love we built as high as heaven
Would be completely lost
And burned down into the ground

More stress would draw upon you
I don't want this stress to slowly eat you
little by little as it slithers away
What else is there left to say
I don't want this love we have
To end up buried in the grave

I don't want to stress you
I especially don't want to leave you
I have no idea what to do
In the end, either way I lose:(

-Ricky Alcaraz

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  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Just a few typos....first stanza "threw" should be "through"
    Last stanza "loose" should me "lose"...

    Other than that this poem is so full of love for one person yet so sad because they don't feel loved back..Thats a sad situation to go through...
    the best thing to do in these moments, is one keep writing for yourself, and two talk about whats bothering you..nice write!

  • 12 years ago

    by UndeadGrace

    Thanks u 2 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think on the last stanza and last sentence you meant to write lose rather than loose.
    :)

    It's a sad piece and somehow I can relate.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow definatly has your voice and emotion. The words are simple yet seem to carry massive meanings... And its so well written. Great job