by Jump from Life Jan 30, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
They bounce across the walk |
by christopher
I think your poetry is good keep up the good work and keep writing well done. the more life experiences you have the better your poetry will become but keep writing |
by Rihanna
I loved sweetie(: |
by Sami
Really good. I love this.(: |
Walk-talk,life-fife,stage-rage, Its good rythme u've made taking shadows as the lives apart...u've writen it shortly nd in a compact manner'' |