The imagery is very beautiful in this verse. Somehow I imagined you sitting on a beach as the sun is setting gazing out to the horizon and thinking of someone who perhaps doesn't live near you but...you wish they did...there just seemed to be some sort of yearning in your words.

I'm not even going to check if you have the form in order because you always seem to master them with such ease. Very enjoyeable read.

This is wonderful. I have never attempted a sonnet before but just reading how beautifully this is, i have been inspired to try it. This poem has very well expressed emotions with great imagery. Well written.

"Soaring among the mellow dreams,
From dawn to dusk I think of thee."

the most beautiful lines. You poem was fantastic, the imagery brilliant. I have written this form but was never fond of it till now. Beautiful Raj

Oh how beautiful is this poem!

I am really enjoying formed poetry right now and I think you have done well with this one!

The images are gorgeous and so well written. I smiled while reading this and it just felt like sunshine to me!

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I just love 'thee' everytime I say it. It feels so romantic, so heartfelt and so pure. I don't know...

well, let's not forget the crux of your poem,,, it's leaking with floral imagery and melodious tunes.

Penned :)

I love this form and I like the flow of this write from start to finish. The reader can feel the warmth and love that blossoms in the writer's heart..enjoyed the read :)

One of the beautiful poem i came across for a long long time.

The flow of this form along with your words is just a lethal combination...loved it :)

My heart skips at that charming grin,
Whispering till the sun peeps in,
chasing glimmering destiny,
From dawn to dusk I think of thee.