Unoriginal - Tanka

by Larry Chamberlin   Jan 30, 2012


Nothing I submit
lays claim as original
nor will it ever;
the only talent I have
is recording what I see.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Hehee either they are reading it wrong or i am..or none is..but i got addicted to this piece...leaves an impact,for me i surely still insist that you werent targeting yourself rather than implying how everything we create throu words...is already there but in a diff form...okay i tried not to babble but came again and couldnt help it!

    Wise wise wsie poet! Honest human being..God thinks your being grateful too XD

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Awesome poem!!! So much is said in 5 lines.
    I assume this is just the way you are feeling but to be honest......................
    PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT
    A load of bull lol

    Kidding...

    well sort of lol

    Every poem that I have seen from you and everyone on here is absolutely original. Even if you record what you see - you are showing us what you see through YOUR EYES and no one else's thus the poetry is original. Everyone has some form of talent when it comes to poetry. There are people that have talent when it comes to rhyming or another person may have talent when it comes to formed poetry. Each person's style is unique and that is what makes them original.
    You are an exceptional writer and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise :| even yourself lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    It is very original indeed. Loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    And how you see it is original :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I agree with what's said above. You are originality, itself!! :)

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