This is sad but beautiful

This is indeed sad. From the very beginning, i pictured a girl all alone and miserable without no one who she can trust, no one to look out for her and to love her,

And so she is broken hearted because she feels unwanted, all alone just trying to live in a cold world.

I really loved the part where you introdce us to the girls fears, i felt that was good since it makes the reader connect well with the writer as they will also be thinking about their fears.

The ending couldnt have been better, you did it good, you portrayed that the girl stops crying, it could be that shes sad or she just wants to stop. 5/5