When you look at me
You think you see just a boy
But I am much more

^^ Make it look like this, its easier to read...

I liked this haiku..You picked a subject, you, and in a few short lines described your a man not a boy. Very nice! You did well with this!

Yes, definitively i agree with chelsey.
You have the correct syllables count for the haiku or senryu ( both structures have the same syllable counts).

Also I see that you also have the ability to create haikus. The flow is incredible and your ideas as well. you are making it look that it's so easy to write them. Great Job.

Chelsea and Everlasting,thanx.Chelsea,yes,it looks better that way(I typed it in with my phone so cldnt space it well).Ever(can I cal u dat?),haikus are quite easy to write 4 me.Thanks 4 the comments.