Hey MaryAnne.

this is a fantastic right from you... I love how you incorporate action with beautiful figurative language.
'stretch my feet' -- I love it.

and then, the 'feat' ..... love these variations in sound.

And at the end, the fall of elbows on the table, omg, what melody it has made.

A FANTASTIC RIGHT. and I'mma sure you're gonna deal with that fault brilliantly.

Going into my favorites.

We all have those moments of weakness of absolute self ridicule. You penned this with powerful emotion. Worded it for affect and I enjoyed each line.
And you're strong enough to over come what ever the issue:)