Its the details in ur writings everytime i find sir,potraits of life nd phase u defined ! Amazing !

Oh how I do love this!

I love how you have started with Here and ended with Gone and then the words become opposite of each other.

Another formed poetry done awesomely by you!

I love how this poem makes me think of things. It is such a deep poem about life. The part where you have mentioned Maya - as in the Mayan Calendar. Makes me think of the end of the world which apparently is supposed to be this year lol

What I love is it also makes me what to challenge myself more and venture out in different types of poetry.

You can learn so much from each other and I've learnt a number of things from reading yours!!!