Seeing that twinkle in your eyes,
Knowing that we have someone who relies on us

^ I feel like you should expand into one more sentence after that one. Its kind of fragmented, it just stopped. Or reword it into "We know"..it just started off weird to me...

The rest of the poem was adorable. I loved the part about the baby has his eyes, but they are just like you when it comes down to loving...that was so sweet and sincere. I loved it!

Good write!!

Thank you :)

How loving this poem of yours
5/5

(sigh)-happiness and contentment.Not bad but maybe i will be able to relate with it better when i have my own bundle of joy and somebody to share her(yes,i want girls) with.I envy your little paradise.

My girlfriend was pregnant but had a miscarriage like maybe four days ago.. so i dont have my little paradise. it was written in my point of view on how it would be if we had a baby.