Rare Guy

by ArtistrySoul   Jan 31, 2012


You can be a nice guy
but no girl wants to know
Your brushed aside
like a bad desire,
hopelessly waiting
your love will grow

I'm just trying to be polite,
not all guys have the
same design pattern
Could it be that I am too nice,
we also feel fragile and
feel nothing without your heart
Wherever your soul wonders
its presence will always be felt

I guess in life I'm just one
of the unlucky ones,
who won't be found and loved :'0( </3

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  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Aww, I hate to say that I've had many guy friends who felt this way, that they were nice and therefore somewhat overlooked but stay the nice, beautiful person you are!

    Love this poem, especially the line "wherever your soul wanders, its presence will always be felt"

    5/5!

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you!!

      Yes! I always will be myself, beautiful and nice is not just said but seen by others =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    The ending was quite sad, but the world need more nice guys! They are very hard to find (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Yeah, some of us can relate this feeling...I really enjoy reading this..keep it up:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    It was a good poem i liked it a lot. it is very sad. and whats worse is that happens all the time. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Reaper

    I know this feeling :( 5/5

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