by L
Hahahaha... It's not what I was thinking.. |
by Maple Tree
Oh WOW.... I love this entire piece...You had me teary as well... reading this I felt sorrow and pain....and then at the end I felt like an explosive went off....ha ha. well done!!! |
by Ole Carsten
There you fooled me a lot, well done |
by yogi73
Hahah!! very clever! |
by Decayed
Im surrounded with biology books now and im bored, so i decided to log in sea the club a little and got curious when i read ur title. |
by Tara Kay
Hahaha, |
by Paul Gondwe
Hahah..wonderful..i am lost for words..i mean, i thought you had a cold, then i see that you were given the wrong food but even better to this tragic thing, you add some humour. Dontget me wrong, i feel sorry what happened but i couldnt help to laugh at how beautifully this ordeal was written. |
Haha yeah it's hot but great and awesome I eat that everyday and it helps build my immune system cuz of the vitamis it holds but I'm kinda used to it's hotness now,,,great poem I enjoyed it very much :) |
I was getting choked up for a minute LOL that was a gotcha..Loved it |
by Karla
Liz, Liz, Liz |
by RSJ
LOOOOOl |
by Bridges
Lmao!!!! Oh my GOSH! That served an epic twist! I was seriously like - OH NOOOO!!! D: and then by the end I was like - o.o ??!?! Hahaha Good one! And YEAH, damn it, that waitress!! ;D |
by Timothy
Brilliant attention to detail, ah, such inspiration. |
by kiki
Lol! it was pretty good! |
by Lonely Rider
Hahaha i loved the twist :D |