Hmmmmm, ive been that guy on the other side, and females, or males just wont ever realise how hard it is, its okay to walk away when the end is evident, but its a kick in the teeth that hurts lol.

now onto the poem itself, I actually enjoyed this one, it flowed rather well, you got a clear message out there and some of the sentances you stringed together were done nicely. kudos

I think the Elergy was spot on! Love to see gems who sing theirs, even while they last... That shows a sense of maturity and consciousness, found in but a few.. Who Knows Tomorrow, afterall!? Elegant dude..

Samtyms u predict of ua death so is the Will.