Dark Smile
by Kooshal Dhunnoo Feb 2, 2012
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With a fake smile we can easily |
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12 years ago
Try to use self confidence and you will what i mean behind this.
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12 years ago
Try to use self confidence and you will what i mean behind this.
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12 years agoby Failing Stoic
The form could do with a little tidying up, but this little chesthunt has the potential to be a good piece, but I think more content is required. Perhaps you could introduce a character, or persona, who can give more colour and life to the piece? Expand on the "comedy scene" you speak of. Add some metaphors, maybe word play or alliteration...Give it a go =] I'd love to see what you come up with, if you're up to the challenge? =]
Well done
