My loss
by bobbiejo Feb 2, 2012
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It will always be my loss when you try to talk to me and i dont respond its my loss when when i yell at you for no reason its my loss when i decide its just my fault its always my loss just please try to help me with the problem i contain you know its my fault please forgive me you know i didnt mean it its my loss and it will always be my loss. |
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12 years ago
by bobbiejo
Ok i will try better nest time
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12 years agoby L
The only thing I can say is that this piece needs either punctuation or line breaks. :)
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12 years ago
PErhaps the confusion that seems to be palpable in this piece stems from the general discoordination one lives in when one suffers a monumental loss like the loss of a loved one.
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12 years ago
by bobbiejo
Awww thanks
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12 years ago
by BlueJay
I can tell you are capible of getting one. Just keep writting and who knows what will happen :)
