Its all for you too (with help from JR)

Alright so i know i already have this poem submited but my best friend JR read it and is helping me restrain from cutting. So when he read it he decided to change a "few" things. So this is his version. Enjoy and please tell me which one you like better. Thanks. :)
-Angel

You said you loved me,
When you looked into my eyes.
I should have known,
Your words were lies.

Through you,
My heart was opened.
Because of you,
It is now broken.

I want you to know,
Go away.
For with me,
You'll never stay.

I can not stay here,
Anymore.
This is what,
Moving on is for.

I'll ball my hand,
Into a fist.
And beat the shit out of the boys,
That never felt my kiss.

I will sit there,
In heaven because there you'll not go.
Cause you're going to hell,
Just so you know.

Exacty what,
You did to me.
Now at rest,
In peace i will be.

All alone,
Will i be in death.
Where i can live,
Without regret.

I've finally moved on,
You're not in my mind.
God will deal with you,
And all of your kind.

I hope you love your life,
With me now gone.
Cause my ghost will forever haunt you,
Until you're dead on your lawn.

And i'll make you suffer,
Everything I went through.
Just remember that all my pain,
Is meant for you too.