Wow, this poem is so beautiful and mesmerizing. I really enjoyed it from the beginning until the end. You painted romantic imagery that made me imagine a special and lucky couple, and it felt so real and sweet. I love all of your descriptions but I did have a few favorite stanzas: |
Thanks dear for the lovely comment, i appreciate. Hugs |
Thanks dear for the lovely comment, i appreciate. Hugs. |
You really put your heart into this poem. Very inspiring and fun to read. Beautiful |
Thanks for the assuring comment, i appreciate. |
How thoughtful of you to stop by berry sister, much much appreciated. With love ;-) .. |
by christopher
Yeah i like it however the poem lacks a constant running flowing style which only comes with writing more and learning from errors. still the ideas are there and improving good luck |
Thanks for your comment, it's encouraging. Blessings.. |