Comments : Snake

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    I'm going to nominate this.
    You've done a perfect job in here Dear, The way you explained silence was so accurate also

    I fell in love with this piece =-) 5/5. and a nomination

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Yaki I love thisssssssssss!! I might read this and record my voice for u!!

    The way u start off is actually poetic, I loved it!! I wanna expand but I can't, I just love it...the part that a one yr old taught u sneakiness...amazing!