I really like this poem. I like how it relates to love but has a dark undertone to it. I especially like "And from dark waters you can dry the sea...sweet darling, won't you think well of me?" It's captivating.

Timothy, you rock dude.
Your style... your style..... it is OFF THE CHAIN!

I agree to Abed, your style is definately unique and that is what I like.

I think this poem flows really well and I like the rhymes too, they aren't overused at all, but you managed to come up with something that is used rather rarely.

Enjoyable read. :)

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