Hun this is completely sad!

such as a shadowed entity that cries
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It makes me think of your subconcious, trying to deal with things in the background - so you don't have to

Well done!!!

x

I love what you write sista. Awesome piece.

Wow, that was depressing. :( How much sorrow can a 7 lined poem possess?? You did a wonderful job on expressing the disappointment and the lingering sadness you must've felt...(or are still feeling) for a long time. Wow. Really, this is a great write!

5/5

I'm just wondering if one the next line it should be have passed or simply passed.

that passed away with my unread diary

Wow, first line won it for me. Beautifully written!!

Keep your expectations high because you got skills ma'am! :)
I love it, and I was deeply affected with your tone.