by Lioness
Oh I love this!!! |
Brilliant images, vibrant and clear . Fluid wording all around great write |
by L
You know, I'm fascinated by your used of words. As I read it every words seems to be in the right place. Well done. |
by Ms Happiness
Amazing poem:) great work 5/5 |
by Decayed
The difference between this and BLANK is gigantic. |
by Jenni
I love your nature poems because they show your tight bond to it. You do not describe a scenery, but you literally create it with your words. To be honest I did not want this poem to stop and even if it ended, it still continued in my mind for a while, if that makes any sense. |
by Mostafa
I loved the description, short and simple yet wonderful : ) |
by Karla
Sista, The Goddess is proud of you. What you write is always awesome. |
This is so marvelous, entails vivid imagery. I love how you used natures finest to describe the tune of music. Short but exquisitely written. Much blessings to you :-). |
A soul truly in love with nature can compose such a work |