Embrace me forever

Thank you, Mandy!

Your poems are amazing...you write from your experience and what you truly feel. Hope to see more of your works.

Have a superb day!

Ray :)

Some really good lines in this poem- although it was all fantastic.

"These jet-black thunderclouds,
rolling above while I drown"

- Such lovely imagery here, vivid, sad, and beautiful. Good word choice.

"Because you change my life
See what you meant in my eyes"

- One of my favorite lines.

I feel that your poetry always manages to really make me think or feel something powerful in some way or another. 5/5

mandy :)

This is one beautifully written romantic piece. Great flow and and an powerful image to take reader to a beautiful place with someone special. Loved it.

all the best and take care

I am taken away by this; I may possibly put this on my facebook and of course give you credit. I would just like to dedicate it to someone if you dont mind.

When we find that one person who heals us mentally as well as emotionally making us whole, been separated from that person even for a day makes us feel miserable. It is a kind of love that heals everything just lying in their arms..I find this a touching write..take care.