by Sylvia
Ray, this is filled with such emotion, things that we wish to convey to the one we love and sometimes think we are afraid to do so. This has such a romantic touch to it. Well done. |
by Meena Krish
When we find that one person who heals us mentally as well as emotionally making us whole, been separated from that person even for a day makes us feel miserable. It is a kind of love that heals everything just lying in their arms..I find this a touching write..take care. |
by Jessybear126
I am taken away by this; I may possibly put this on my facebook and of course give you credit. I would just like to dedicate it to someone if you dont mind. |
This is one beautifully written romantic piece. Great flow and and an powerful image to take reader to a beautiful place with someone special. Loved it. |
by mandy
Some really good lines in this poem- although it was all fantastic. |
by Ray Blue
Thank you, Mandy! |