This is amazing <3
Great job :) x

Wow, Holly; so powerful... That was just... Amazing, powerful and heart stopping.

5/5

-Heather

Seriously Intense 5/5

Wow this is amaZing and awesome,,greatly written I loved it it was a excellent poem,,everything is great 5/5

This is truly a different piece for you but you did well on it! you used some excellent terminology to get the point across and while reading this piece i was on edge the whole time :)
100/100