by Paul Gondwe Feb 4, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I tried banging my head |
by East Poetry
Wow... what a heart break, you penned it so powerfully! in time all will calm down. As I'm sure it did. |
by Alodia
Your poem is good ^.^ |
by Lonely Rider
Love can indeed give so much pain... but then it's always better to move. I could feel the frustration and anger in your words. well written. |
by Xionide
Somehow I knew this piece would have emotion inside of it, to be honest there's nothing I can faulter about your words here because ive been in this place so many times each time more painful than the other, it's so easy though, to wish the pain away with every fabric we have inside us, but even then if it were so it'd be just as painful next time, at least we have our experience to hepl guide us the next time. |
Wow greatly written I loved it and grave emotions shown,,u can feel it all |