I have never seen writing put like that. this is very deep, and your word choice was beautiful.

Beautiful write . Pen and paper is a very powerful too to express your thoughts /ideas which can change the course of history

I don't know how I missed this or how I didn't comment.
I thought it was creative, with a great flow and the tone from the first line to the last keep the reader interested..Excellent

Wow, Paul, this is an excellent poem! I really enjoyed it, and was captivated from start to finish. I really like how you wrote this poem, and the message was really nice... I like how you alluded to the war in Iraq and the hunger in Sudan, it shows how you care and want to express how you feel about what's happening in the world...

Even though the ending wasn't really positive, I still feel it was hopeful.. and thoughtful.. to want to change the world.

Great job with this poem!

Excellent poem :)

This is my favorite poem of yours "so far."
the first line entrapped me with interest. As you may gather from my deeper philosophy style poems to say you are TRUTH, to me is very profound. the rest of you poem supported the concept and I like how it ended as well.