Ouch, reading this stung a little bit guess that's because I could relate to it.

"Oh how I can feel the pain.
Tears flow
like acid they burn
through my cheek
into my heart"

I understand the acid part . trust me. . lol I might've used such an extreme word too. but thats how it feels... I really liked how you ended this as well. . .
is it bad that I appreciated that you put death into this, i dont know but I really like your poem. . .definitely stirs emotions, good poem :)