I am... So amazed by this. You write it so beautifully. I wish i could write like this...... Oh my gosh it sparked so many emotions from deep deep down in my soul. So many memories.. So much happiness and pain... all the doubt.. Everything. it sparked my emotions.. and made me feel alive again.. Reminded me what love was like.

Wow... this poem was so intriguing... I loved it... it was different and unique.

I absolutely loved this part
"one day I will
wake up to find you
-a dream; an uncertain
reality."

I really like the idea of how you are scared of the butterflies you feel... and how you're running away from something you're not sure about... I think many of us can relate to this... We all run away from things, whether they can be good or bad for us.

The last stanza was really powerful as well.

Nominating <3!

I wish I could write like you; so jealous!
This is amazing! You can feel his confusion and you wishing he knew. I can visualize you running away from him.

Love how you ended it. :)

Flawless!
5/5

Accidentally double post. Editing this one to say hmm would nominate it but I guess it can't be. Dang! Lol

This has been written beautifully. I loved your every words rom stanza 1 and i still love them as i write this. Amazing.

Wow!

Hun this is a very powerful poem

I can see the fear in this poem, in the words

Sometimes love can scare us completely

x

This is great, as always your free flow is excellent

Very powerful. strong.... take care

I love reading your poems Meme, Mainly because they flow so well and although simple they hold meaning and emotion.

That being said, I felt somewhat differently to this piece,
The flow was smooth and solid however I felt an unusual sadness to this piece, that I can't comprehend whether it was purely the wording or my own thoughts,
so let me ponder over this one a little while and I'll be back when I have read it a few times.

However, I will say that this was a really intriguing piece. xxxxx

This is everything I picture a poem could be.
Straight to the point and with no complexity
what so ever, Just your emotions being spilled down Naked and bear, The most powerful kind of poems.

I can relate to this from A to Z, although I think what doesn't kill you can only make you stronger, Even love, Don't you think =-)?
5/5 never the less.

You never cease to WOW! me with your brilliant thoughts. I love the end lines, 'Love can't kill you; it just hangs your heart between life and death'. I see love hovering around two admirers but the subject is hesitating to be consume in its pool; to avoid been a specter of oneself. The words flow smoothly cascading like a waterfall, resting and forming a lake; the bitter truth of the sweet but intricating 4 letter word. Wonderful is an understatement, you're AWESOME luv. KUDOS! ;-)

Many poems are written about love, sadness and the train of emotions that go with it.
However I think this is so creative. Each line , each stanza was brilliant in it's own way, each one complimenting the other..
Excellent

This piece itself is a killer!
amazing, Meme:)

I love this poem its kind of exhilirating and it tells the truth i love the reference to your fear of butterflies to show something you fear but also what butterflies symbolise overall a good peom