Sensual and very imagetic.Loooooved your piece.

Creative poem, very original in wording and theme. Many love poems are written but few stray from the path of cliche.
Excellent write, refreshing

Ohhhhh mercy! This piece is elegant, sensual and passionate... your word usage is beautiful.... love this piece!

Your wording is awesome, and it felt eerily brilliant. If I could cave in through your mind, I'd find heavens of talent...
awesome.