Comments : My sorrow

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love the opening line of this poem, it really got me thinking and it was beautifully said. I am sorry for this sadness, you really pen it well, only thing I didn't understand is who was "they're" when you say they think you are cute, is it your friends?

    I liked how you just created this image (I thought of you sitting alone with your sorrow just tagging along) and everything is questionable....love....hope.

    Keep writing :)