Is it me or is this diffrent you normal right i loved the images you sent i kept getting flashs as i read ... the tittle drew me in straight away a very well written piece

Is it me or is this diffrent you normal right i loved the images you sent i kept getting flashs as i read ... the tittle drew me in straight away a very well written piece

Yes, if there was only a way that we could reverse time, then alot of things could be done. But I guess sometimes if you think about it, what happened before kinda shaped the present you are living in now.

Amazingly written sweetie.

Keep it up :)

Yep, i totally see the twist you told me about. It really fit nicely and hit all the right romantic images.

5/5

Great job, hun.

-heather

5/5. I Don't know how you get nominated, or how the voting is done, But Definitely Deserve to win with this one to. You Are An Amazing Writer And i really enjoy reading and learning From your writing. 5/5

Simple yet soooo appealing....loved every stanza
though the ending went little depressing..but that's what the title convey... amazing write holly
5/5 <3 :)

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Love the detail, beautiful poem... heartbreaking ending, so sorry. :( 5/5

I loved this... I think anyone who has ever lost a lover, espeacially an honest forever kind, can relate to this. You move on but you never forget... you never stop whishing you could change things...