Comments : What would you do if.........

  • 12 years ago

    by Deep Purple

    Rihanna...what can i say...its too deep...ur pain is felt thru the words....it directly hits at the core. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow this poem is relatable. excellent 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is really good. The question you ask has the reader captured in this and how you penned down the questions was full of emotions and was heartfelt.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Heartfelt & Superb! Good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You don't know what you have until its gone. Been down that road, it hurts. This one is very deep.

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    It's very pretty but idk maybe it could use a tweak here and there! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Breaking up is tough no matter what but you penned questions that run through the mind each time.
    All and all I think most make it through just fine in time.

    your flow was a bit shaky in spots but over all a good write

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    As i read in which i helped i can't help but wonder did i help you enough? and darling im my own boss now! :)