Comments : Like A Broken Record Player

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well said, sometimes I heart thinks it would be okay, because you still hold a torch for him or still have feelings, but our head knows that the hurt is stronger and you would only be causing heartache for yourself and your new boyfriend,

    I can't say I relate to this, as my relationship status has been single for many more years than I can rememeber.

    But I think we need to vent and poetry is a great way.

    To the poem, I like the structure and simpleness of this, much more ain't needed to get the point across, we all feel the thoughts you ponder over.

    A great piece

    Love xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by brokenf4evermore

    Another Good one 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Venting can make the best poetry of all.
    Great job ob expressing yourself.
    Loved every stanzas.

    5/5

    -Heather