I wasn't crazy about the flow, some lines seemed a little long but that said, it's a minor detail for the wording was simple and powerful

I am evil voice that prowls your mind
searching for your weakest part
You think of it as a disturbing image
while I think of it as pure art

I am the loneliness that keeps you awake
in the middle of that blackened night
I am the wrong choice made in your life
when you believe that your choice was right
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I loved these 2 stanza's Liz, I really could relate to them, our fears are our enemies and they scare us because we let them, too true

Love
xxxxxx

Holy cow,

Well, as I reading it I was like aha, that's it is.. Sort of like in your face...lol. At first I was wondering what it was and in the end boom! I'm your worst fear. I love it. I can't find anything wrong with it. I like the tone in which I read it and in which was written.

Holy Moly Liz-

Love this piece...... Each stanza is powerful.... and the ending just smacks and packs with "You GO GIRL" .....explosive!!!

Great write. I loved the somplicity of this and the imagery behind it. You just forgot a line to say you are a Lioness...lol

Was pretty sure that this poem either described the Devil or your worst nightmare
don't ask me why, anyways amazingly pinned, you've wrote down some Very dark ideas yet they are all true, feel them all at a certain time
5/5 liz

That thing on the edge of our thoughts. It's always there, that fear lurking beneath the surface, waiting to be exploited by something in our life. Awesome use of words. words and music.

I am in love with this piece.
I am in awe how you wrote something new, I think... with the rhymes and the subtle ones.

Sorry for taking this long to comment, I saved this for other time ;)

Liz, girl you rock, and the Kite Runner (the worst fear, in the end) within you is extraordinary.

I was literally holding back tears of terror while reading this, no lie! I wanted to quit half-way, not because it wasn't intruiging but because it was scaring the hell out of me!!! x__x Maybe, I'm just a wuss. :( But this definitely disturbed me! This was incredible!! I have much respect, your words move the reader in a horrific way!! I'm meaning this all as a great big compliment, I hope you realize!!! haha Anyways AMAZING Write!! Truly -shivers-

5/5