Beauty of a Tear Drop

by Maple Tree   Feb 6, 2012


Beautiful formations
Start to fall, slowly
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Elegant design of a dew shaped sonnet
Revealing sorrow of broken emotions
Is far more explosive than pain itself
Gravity releases a shattered thought
Blending feelings laced with iridescent prisms

Simply beautiful....

Healing ones soul, a soothing rapture
Cascading In many directions
Falling upon a cold floor
Forming a heart shaped memory....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Andrea, this poem feels alive because of those drops you have added, and then you continued describing them perfectly till the end... and I loved how you said they formed a heart shape. I can infer that the tears are falling helplessly from your eyes, and that you still love the person. amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your format is creative. I enjoy reading something new and different good Job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I admit I love your writings. You always surprise me with something different.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Dew dripping, pain, self healing

    Your imagination is vivid, love it
    Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this! I love how images are incorporated in poems and I love what you have done with the drops of tears falling

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    Well done with this hun!

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