Oh my god, I absolutely loved this.

It was beautiful, the imagery and wording, it sounded so serene and simple yet I am sure there is much complexness to the lives of these people you describe.

Isn't it crazy how we can see the emotion even if it isn't through tears or smiles, especially when the closeness is there, that just melted my heart, the ending.

What a lovely piece this was.

love xxx

Jane... you are a goddess.

After I finished reading , I was just staring at it ... in awe ... the imagery has left me speechless. I really don't know what to say except that this is an exceptionally well written poem. Definitely going to my favorites for reference, to learn how to build beautiful metaphors.

Fantastic imagery !