Weeping sadness

by Ole Carsten   Feb 6, 2012


I weep of joy and sadness
My tears are dripping pain
Dripping over sad fields
A crystal for a fortune teller

Seeking the path for me
Where am I going?
Following my tears?
Finding the wishing well?

Tears are talking in riddles
You make interpretations of all details
Is the color truthful or a deceptive?
I follow my tears anyway.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi TJ

    thanks and I really appriciate all help you are giving me, very kind of you

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your poems are always filled with emotion, and I find that a good read

    One little suggestion. If this is a question shouldn't it read
    s the color truthful or a deceptive?
    instead of
    s the color truthful are deceptive?

    Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks a lot, you are kind
    ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    Imagery was beautifully - shows a great mastery of words! Honestly inspirational.

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