Comments : First Time

  • 12 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Your poem is excellent, I get the blanks. I wish there was a way to make you not do it. no one but you can make you not want to do it again but you. that place you are going gets darker each time some make it back others don't.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I love the blanks in this.. I get it too. . . . and I just love the last line as well.. ..

    I want to do it all again. . .