I am a peguin

Hey guys well this poem is just something i had to do in English i just wanted to know what u think
I am a penguin

I am all I see
People waiting just waiting
Sheep munching on grass quickly running out
Dogs whining in the sun

I am all I hear
"Tidy your room"
"Do your homework"
"Stop that"
Birds singing a new tune
Cats purring

I am all I feel
Ice cold water refreshing on a hot day
Bugs crawling and bitting as they go

I am all i remember
A garden never ending to the eye
Full of life
Ocean lapping at my feet
the cold sending shivers down my spine

I am all i have been tough
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I am all I think
Lies with truth hidden for nobody to see

I am all of those things
I'm like a penguin on the edge waiting to take the plunge
But one day I willl jump and be free