by Whispy.Gypsy Feb 9, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
On the ground |
Good write .... small nick pick ... dont write short hand ... (plz) jus doesnt go ... well penned keep writing x |
by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye
It's beautiful but i think u could do much better but still it's beautiful to the extreme the emotion is there! :) |
by Rima
Hmmmmm. I'll have to keep this in my head for a LONG time. This gets me a' thinkin'. I like it. A lot :) |