Demonnnn! you have such emotion in this poem, you portray a good image of whats being said, that made it more fun to read. you even got your flow correct as well. such misery imbedded in this poem. bravo

I like it, a lot.... love your word flow and your choice of words. the emotion you show and i love the last two line.

Very nice! ilove dark poetry and this is one of my favorites now! :)

You are an amazing poet. I love your work.

It was well writen i do agree

Well done i like it

Well done i like it

Thank you :)

Nice poem. Well done.

Great poem!I loved it!

Steven

Wow very great poem :] i love it

im sorry for your loss :[
be strong<3

5/5

A very good dark poem
keep it up!

i enjoyed reading this, even though the subject is sad i think you have written it very well.

The rhyming was good and the overall flow was good too =).. i can definatley relate

5/5 from me